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goldenma 發表於 2014-3-17 21:07
多謝jingiou提醒 !重新補上修正!
小弟偶爾發現"祝福文英文背面修正"有若干文筆之誤,其誤雖不損正文要旨,但望其修正可令全文更臻完美。
願各網友常諗祝福文,添福啟智!
Typo in paragraph of Note 2: "who are destined for por futures"
Recommended: "who are poorly destined for life"
Typo in paragraph of Break Superstition [line 2]: "development.sages have.against"
Recommended: "development, sages have against"
Typo in paragraph of Break Superstition [line 4]: "prevailing needs of soviety."
Recommended: "prevailing needs of society"
Typo in paragraph of Break Superstition [line 7]: "culture. Ihave."
Recommended: "culture. I have"
Typo in paragraph of Break Superstition [line 9]: "sceript provided."
Recommended: "script provided"
Typo in paragraph of While rain falls [line 1]: "same ground,,grasses that."
Recommended: "same ground, grasses that"
Typo in paragraph of While rain falls [line 6]: "elements of earth water.fire,air"
Recommended: "elements of earth, water, fire, air"
Typo in paragraph of While rain falls [line 8]: "the stars, Using these"
Recommended: "the star. Using these"
Typo in paragraph of While rain falls [line 8]: "right purposes purposes"
Recommended: "right purposes" |
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